#132605 - 07/02/07 09:59 PM
Poets' Corner
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Panning for gold
Registered: 08/28/00
Posts: 3431
Loc: les Etats-Unis d'Amerique
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Everyone is a poet. They might not know it... Words are the all seeds you need. Plant one, for a poem, and grow it for a time... give it water and let it feed...no need to worry 'bout rhyme... and when it is it tall and it is flowering... here is a corner to show it... where it can speak or shout or sing. Come on guys, do your thing. Well, I hope that improvisation served to break the ice. Chris has agree to help us out with this tread and I am looking forward to much fun. So... poetry needed  No sagas, no epics, however. Sonnets, limericks, haiku, free verse, prose poems, epitaphs... are hereby solicited. And no poem is too short, friends. For instance: Lines Upon Milk Spilled On the FloorHe wept. She swept.Nor is any poem too silly, I hasten to add (ever try sweeping milk?).
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#132622 - 07/02/07 11:55 PM
Re: Poets' Corner
[Re: cricket]
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Husband and Father
Registered: 09/05/04
Posts: 5719
Loc: Brisbane, Australia
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Sweep some milk, or herd a cat Or something difficult like that Such tasks will ease a troubled mind And help escape a mental bind Or at least keep one from getting fat
Alas those lines just barely scan They flout poetical convention I hope, in your kindness, that you can Forgive this simple flawed invention
Edited by Bravus (07/02/07 11:56 PM)
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#132655 - 07/03/07 05:33 AM
Re: Poets' Corner
[Re: D. Allan]
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Husband and Father
Registered: 09/05/04
Posts: 5719
Loc: Brisbane, Australia
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Frank Zappa and the Mothers Were at the best place around But some stupid with a flare gun Burned the place to the ground
(not original)
Edited by Bravus (07/03/07 05:34 AM)
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#132670 - 07/03/07 02:45 PM
Re: Poets' Corner
[Re: cricket]
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Posting "as the Spirit moves"
Registered: 07/08/00
Posts: 570
Loc: Apopka, FL. USA
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(e)]For fun, I sometimes like to take another poet's creation and alter it to suit my own taste. Take for example, e.e. cummings poem:
l(a
le af fa ll
s) one l
iness
A twist and a turn, I give you:
g(an
ap ple fa ll
s) rav i
ty
I'm sorry...I couldn't make head or tail out of this one...............
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#132671 - 07/03/07 03:02 PM
Re: Poets' Corner
[Re: Gladussee]
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Registered: 11/11/03
Posts: 4659
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No problem, Don! Some poems aren't for everyone. I liked your second verse to my first! I couldn't find the original one I'd writte a while back, but here's the added verses I'd written last night:
I prayed the prayer of Jabez 'Twas the fash'n'ble thing to do. Look where fashion led me, It brought me here to you.
"Braoaden my horizons, Lord," I pled, "and make me new." (Afear'd I'd grown too comf'rt'ble, Afear'd my time was through.)
"God, muddy up and salve me, Refresh, recleanse, renew." When prayed, the prayer of Jabez Draws others near to You.
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#132691 - 07/03/07 05:56 PM
Re: Poets' Corner
[Re: cricket]
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Posting "as the Spirit moves"
Registered: 07/08/00
Posts: 570
Loc: Apopka, FL. USA
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